Wednesday, 14 October 2020

Dangerous Games Mutant Pet Store by Lexi and Jaye

 Hola. My friend Lexi and I made a book about a mutant pet store.  

 Please read our story and leave a comment below.  It will be much appreciated. 


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4 comments:

  1. Anonymous14 October 2020 at 14:10

    Hi jaye I really liked you book it was fun and cool book.

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  2. Anonymous14 October 2020 at 14:11

    I loved your story it was nice and interesting
    your story was like mine but a bit different
    you could of added another chapter

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  3. Anonymous16 October 2020 at 12:40

    Hi Jaye it's Jam I like how you added the right amount of pictures and you made some of the pictures yourself but you need to put paragraphs in.

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  4. Anonymous19 October 2020 at 12:50

    Hi Jaye
    I loved your story it was interesting
    I did a story like that but your one was awesome
    You could of added more words in the glossary

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